Independence Day: Story Explanation: Caution Spoilers!!!

Brothers,

So yea..that story I just posted, is...I guess you could say..a sort of an autobiography of myself...in a strange way. It's sort of what you could say as..my testimony..sort of, not really....God is not a hot chick..but that kind of revalation/epiphany kind of thing.....its sort of what happened when 'I realized that God actually did exist...and was not what some people would say a 'sadist'...and he actually gives a damn about me. This is sort of what happens when Dravin gazes into the fathomless depths of the girl's amber eyes. He realizes that his past life has been a lie, and he finally sees things clearly...he finally is able to see the truth.
This is sort of what happened when I accepted God back into my life again almost two months back...maybe a little more, you could say. It was like opening a crinkled and yellowing book from your aged library bookshelf, and dust off its archiac cover. You've read this book countless times, it is your favorite. You open the book, and its familiar fragrance bursts off the pages, filling you with old and used book smell. You are again in the world of your favorite book. You have come back to an old freind, and it embraces you warmly. Thats kind of like what happens when you accept JC as your savior, for real. You've been gone since childhood atleast, wondering in a haunting world, away from all the books, including this one, as you realize you have been tainted by the tube, unable to break away. Like the T.V. in this analogy, the world had taken us away from JC and God, away from all that is true, all that is bright. Jesus welcomes you with open arms, welcoming you, his old freind, back into the Christian Hood. Anyway, this is sort of what the story is about...tell me if you have any critisims of this story.

God Bless
leskald